A couple of weeks ago I interviewed a colleague of mine, Greg Peterson, about his experiences working as a Writing Fellow in a Communication Disorders class. This interview made me even more curious, and I decided that I just had to know more about the Writing Fellow program.
Luckily my Writing Center Director, Dr. Tim Taylor, had a wonderful suggestion for me: "Why don't you interview Professor Fahy (the professor who Greg works for as a Writing Fellow) and see what she has to say about the program?"
Sometimes I wonder where I would be without my wonderful faculty mentors...
So, I contacted Professor Fahy, and she agreed to be interviewed for the blog. This is the very first Writing Fellow program that has been offered at EIU, which I think makes these interviews extremely exciting (nerd alert, I know). Let me introduce you to Ms. Fahy a little more:
Jill
Fahy is an Associate Professor in the Department of Communication Disorders and
Sciences at Eastern Illinois University, where she teaches courses in Acquired
Language Disorders, Executive Functions, Right Hemisphere Disorders, and
Neurology. Ms. Fahy lectures nationally
on the assessment and treatment of executive function disorders and associated
communication impairments. She recently delivered the keynote address for an
international conference of speech-language pathologists from Denmark, Sweden,
and Norway. Ms. Fahy also supervises
clinical practicum at the EIU Speech-Language-Hearing Clinic, focusing
disorders of aphasia, executive dysfunction, social communication disorders,
and cognitive-communication disorders. Ms.
Fahy has co-authored an article on the clinical implications of neuroscience
research in Broca’s area, published in Topics
in Stroke Rehabilitation, and is co-author of The Source for Development of Executive Functions. Prior to teaching at EIU, Ms. Fahy
provided services to populations with acquired neurological deficits in medical
settings. She also happens to be an
alumnus of EIU, with an undergraduate degree in French.
What follows are the fantastic responses Professor Fahy provided to my questions.
1. What
interested you in participating in the Writing Fellow program?
I have always been interested
in how students develop into educated, articulate, thoughtful
professionals. I am interested in how
students learn, think, process information, draw conclusions, explain
information, and defend their suggestions or conclusions. One of my favorite things to ask students, in
class, is Why? … or, How do you know that? And, although it
may sound strange, one of my favorite things to do is grade writing
assignments because it lets me see how students craft their thoughts and
choose their words. Students’ written
work is almost like a picture—a snapshot into their evolving ability to think,
organize, and articulate big ideas.
The opportunity to participate
in the Writing Fellow program just evolved, really, following some ongoing
discussions about student writing with Dr. Tim Taylor, Director of the EIU
Writing Center. Tim and I both happen to
serve on the CAA Learning Goals Writing Sub-Committee, and one day he asked if
I might be interested in participating in the first round of a new program he
and his colleagues were crafting. A few
conversations later, and we were situated to have the first embedded Writing
Fellow on campus integrated into a junior level CDS class that I am teaching
this spring.
2. I recently wrote a blog about the importance of writing in plain language. My son was born with a hearing disorder, and I had a lot of problems understanding the literature that our doctors gave us. I found myself longing for literature written in plain language. Do you think that students in the CDS field should learn to write for multiple audiences (colleagues and the layperson)?
Absolutely. And yet this can
be a challenge, for many reasons. Students
working towards the required graduate degree in Communication Disorders &
Sciences must not only master a vast array of disorder-related knowledge, but
must also develop critical thinking skills sufficient to support the ability
to, eventually, make accurate diagnoses, and generate defensible
recommendations. And, clearly, we also must foster students’ ability to
communicate those conclusions and recommendations in the language of the
consumer—whomever that may be. In any
given day, a speech-language pathologist or audiologist may need to communicate
information to a neurologist, then the spouse of a patient with a traumatic
brain injury, followed by the radiologist, and then the patient himself. If we are working in an educational
environment, our audience might range from the classroom teacher to the
one-on-one aide for a student with disabilities, followed immediately by a conversation
with parents, and then a group of six four-year old children. We must learn to convey information clearly,
accurately, tactfully, and honestly. In
plain language. For the consumer.
3. What
type of writing assignments do you usually craft?
I try to give students the
opportunity to practice communicating complicated information to a particular
audience for a specific reason. For
example, two of the assignments I have given in class this semester have required
students to explain various aspects of traumatic brain injury and protection of
the brain to parents of children or adolescents. The assignments required students to write
this text as though they were hired to write educational brochures—the kind of
reading material you pick up when you sit for an hour at the doctor’s
office. Learning to think more
deliberately about the audience, and the tone, of my writing assignments has
definitely been one of the advantages of my collaboration with Greg (Peterson),
the Writing Fellow dedicated this semester to my neurology class (CDS 3500).
4. Have you noticed a difference in the quality of writing that your students are producing since having a Writing Fellow in the classroom?
YES. Students meet with Greg at least once, and
sometimes twice, as they are working on each of the writing assignments. One specific change I have noticed is the
tremendous growth in students’ ability to craft clear, specific, meaningful
sentences. In past years, there were times when I truly could not discern the
meaning of a simple sentence. I could talk
with the student about this, and ask them to try, verbally, to explain to me
their intent, and there, buried amongst the confusion would be a nugget of
clarity, but it rarely came out in the writing.
I have also noticed improvement in students’ ability to organize
information into a purposeful, cohesive structure. Papers turned in to me have a clear opening
purpose. The body of the paper
transitions from one relevant point to the next. Conclusions have become more useful. As Greg says, students final paragraphs
actually answer the “so what” question that anchors the entire purpose of the
paper. As I grade my students’ writing
this semester, I feel relieved, not frustrated.
I feel as though I am reading the product of an actual investment in
time, energy, and thought—not something written blindly the night before. I
feel hopeful that our students are leaving this class with the tools to become
skillful communicators.
5. What
do you think the difference is between scientific style writing and the type of
writing often seen in an English
composition classroom?
It has been a long time since
I had an English composition class, so I may be off-base, but I would say that
scientific writing primarily requires the use of objective language and statements
of fact. There is little room for
subjectivity or personal opinion. Depending on the audience, scientific
documents may expect certain procedures for formatting and inclusion of
data. Expectations must also be met for
how well diagnostic conclusions and recommendations are supported and
defended. Students learning to write in
our particular discipline have plenty of opportunities to master the brief
progress note for therapy, or the lengthy diagnostic report, or the scientific
article review. But they may benefit
from more specific opportunities to learn the art of explaining complicated
information about the brain, or the trachea, or developmental linguistics, in
plain language. Parents, teachers,
family members, or even policy makers and advocates—these are the people with
whom our students also need to write and speak.
6. Do you think that each discipline would benefit from teaching their own writing course, one that is solely suited to the discipline being studied? Or do you believe that learning to write in a multitude of methods (interdisciplinary) is the best?
That’s a good question. I suppose my initial reaction is to suggest
that we need to develop students’ higher-level writing skills within the
discipline. We worry a lot about whether
or not students in our upper division classes master the content required to
meet certain requirements. It may be
that we could spend a little more time deliberately teaching
discipline-specific writing to help our students assimilate, synthesize,
analyze, and apply their content-knowledge in new ways. Communicating information to various
audiences is perhaps the most critical skill we can foster in our
students. It really doesn’t matter if
our students leave here as experts in the content of their work, if our
students cannot convey that knowledge or expertise to the people with whom they
work.
7. Will
you do the Writing Fellow program again? If so, would you change anything about
it?
YES. I would love to work with the Writing Fellow
program again. The collaboration and benefits are such that I would gladly have
a Writing Fellow in this class every year.
But I also anticipate a surge in faculty applying for this opportunity,
and now that I’ve had my chance, it is someone else’s turn. And no, I wouldn’t change any aspect of this
program. I do intend to compare our
assessment data from last year’s class, to this year, in terms of the quality of
writing. I’m curious to see what objective changes appear, in addition to my
own subjective perceptions about the quality of writing. It would also be helpful to track the
long-term benefits of the Writing Fellow program across the campus, and to
support the Writing Center and Writing Across the Curriculum programs, as they continue
to develop ways to support both faculty and students.
Special thanks to Jill Fahy for taking the time to respond so wonderfully to my questions.