Impact your world
proclaims a CNN member website. Is their
astronomy news associate identifying an interstellar collision? Is a military affiliate recounting the tremors
of war? Perhaps some hard-hitting
football coverage follows the headline?
No, the popular news outlet has misused the verb “impact” to identify
their philanthropic branch. CNN is not
alone, though. The verb has infected term
papers and pop songs, lab reports and presidential speeches.
So what do
we know about this word that has quietly invaded and conquered our lexicon?
Impact is
a verb which describes an instance of forceful contact, but in the specific form
that interests us, it is figurative.
This means that it is used to describe something other than, say, a
collision of a pumpkin with the street.
The pumpkin literally impacts the ground, whereas a poignant speech
figuratively impacts a person (unless, of course, they are seated too near to a
slavering orator.)
Sometimes
figurative language can add variety or give a new perspective on a well worn
image. The starlight danced across the surface of the pond. Here “danced” surprises us, because starlight
has no body with which to dance, but its reflection shifting from ripple to ripple
may resemble the movement. It has
special power to say what the more literal verb, reflected, could not.
However, “impact”
has lost that special power. The impact
of “impact” is diminished, because our brains no longer connect its figurative form
to its literal form, as in: the
grandmother’s love impacted the boy’s life the way a meteor impacts and
redirects another. Instead, “impact” has
been worn out by overuse, and we only perceive that the grandmother’s love vaguely
changed the boy.
So how do
we know when to use impact and when to toss it out?
Here is an
easy check:
Are you
describing a boxing match?
A meteor
shower?
A car
crash?
Sammy
Sosa?
No? Then it may be a good idea to replace those
“impacts.” Fowler’s
Modern English Usage condemns figurative use of the verb, because it has
become technical jargon. Remember, a physical
collision is an impact, but for anything else there is probably a better word.
But what is
that better word?
What probably fits best is either the verb “affect” or the noun “effect.” That pair is the true one-size-fits-all. If you go cross-eyed over a and e, there is still hope. There are many more words at your disposal that will do just as well. Instead try, change, sway, touch, influence, or move.
What probably fits best is either the verb “affect” or the noun “effect.” That pair is the true one-size-fits-all. If you go cross-eyed over a and e, there is still hope. There are many more words at your disposal that will do just as well. Instead try, change, sway, touch, influence, or move.
For the
science majors— whose grumbles I can already hear rising from the verb-shaped
voids in your lab reports— I will beat you to the question:
“Why do I
have to worry about the “English details?”
All the data, charts, and graphs give me enough trouble.”
I answer by
sharing an instance in which English and the use of “impact” is a big deal:
Previous crash test results were disastrous, but
recently the airbag made a big impact on the dummy.
Would you
ride in that car or not? Was the test
dummy cushioned or crushed? We see that
it is not the poets who have more to lose through careless language. At worst their poems are banal, while those
in scientific fields must be clear or jeopardize the safety of their coworkers
and customers. It is for clarity that
the English language has such great variety, and each word we choose affects our
audience.
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